Front cover: I like the front page pictures i think it does resemble something from an RnB magazine. I feel that the background colours could be a bit more brighter as I think it looks a bit dull. I think that the glow around the girl in the picture gives the magazine a bit of a kick.
Contents Page: I think the contents page could do with a bit more colour. Also I think you should put some images on there. I think the scroll looking grey part looks effect and does look RnB
Two page spread: I think the two page spread is really good, i like the way the page splits exactly into two. i think theres needs to be a bit more going on, on the page though as it looks a bit too formal and I think RnB magazines would not be formal.
overall: I think the magazine is really good, just needs a bit more colour
I really like the colour scheme on the front page with the blue. I think the image is really good and love the pose that the model is making. the only real improvement that I could suggest would be to maybe move the image over a little more so that the H isn't as covered. But overall really love the front cover as it really does capture the genre of magazine you had chosen.
Contents page:
I really like how you have kept the same colour scheme with the front cover, as an improvement I would suggest to maybe fill the blank space at the bottom of the page.
Double Page spread:
Love the text font, and the image is really great from the pose to the outfit that you have chosen. The only thing that I could suggest to improve it would be that the main text of the article gets lost at the bottom as the background colour turns to white so maybe either changing the background colour or the text colour.
over all I think its a great concept for the magazine keep up the good work Emily xxxxx
I like the colour scheme and how it has carried on to the content and double page spread. I think on the content page I think you should make the OH bolder so you can see it more clearly. I think you could change the colour of content to the blue colour to give the content more colour. Also add some images. I like the double page spread layout but there is a lot of areas at the top which could be filled and you can't read the text that clear at the bottom but other than that I really like your magazine. Hope this helps. :)
Front cover:
ReplyDeleteI like the front page pictures i think it does resemble something from an RnB magazine. I feel that the background colours could be a bit more brighter as I think it looks a bit dull. I think that the glow around the girl in the picture gives the magazine a bit of a kick.
Contents Page:
I think the contents page could do with a bit more colour. Also I think you should put some images on there. I think the scroll looking grey part looks effect and does look RnB
Two page spread:
I think the two page spread is really good, i like the way the page splits exactly into two. i think theres needs to be a bit more going on, on the page though as it looks a bit too formal and I think RnB magazines would not be formal.
overall:
I think the magazine is really good, just needs a bit more colour
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ReplyDeleteFront Page:
I really like the colour scheme on the front page with the blue. I think the image is really good and love the pose that the model is making. the only real improvement that I could suggest would be to maybe move the image over a little more so that the H isn't as covered. But overall really love the front cover as it really does capture the genre of magazine you had chosen.
Contents page:
I really like how you have kept the same colour scheme with the front cover, as an improvement I would suggest to maybe fill the blank space at the bottom of the page.
Double Page spread:
Love the text font, and the image is really great from the pose to the outfit that you have chosen. The only thing that I could suggest to improve it would be that the main text of the article gets lost at the bottom as the background colour turns to white so maybe either changing the background colour or the text colour.
over all I think its a great concept for the magazine keep up the good work Emily xxxxx
I like the colour scheme and how it has carried on to the content and double page spread. I think on the content page I think you should make the OH bolder so you can see it more clearly. I think you could change the colour of content to the blue colour to give the content more colour. Also add some images.
ReplyDeleteI like the double page spread layout but there is a lot of areas at the top which could be filled and you can't read the text that clear at the bottom but other than that I really like your magazine. Hope this helps. :)